What I Did This Weekend : My First Job
I started my first part time job in the United States on Friday. It is employeed as a clerk in hair accessory shop in the Brea Malls. I have tutored for a year when I was in Korea, but this is first job that I employeed as a service occupation. The reasons of that I work are, first I want to travel around the America in this winter. Second, I want to buy snowboard equipments by myself despite of rely on my parents. I was trying to go to the Concert Under the Stars, but I was working at the shop. Actually these are all that I did on this weekend and I will be doing every weekend instead of play. However, end of this semester, I could do everything that I want to do all by myself.
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Your journal describe your weekend very clearly and why you want to do this job. Maybe you can put your main idea on the first sentence.
When I read your journal, I am proud of you.Because You want to make money by yourself instead of your parents' money. But I found some mistakes about present tense and past tense, spelling, and verb tense. Maybe you can check again.
my self -> myself. Don't leave space. You did a good job!
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